Comments on: Blog ‘Spring Cleaning’ – Day 1

By: Mariana

Mariana — Wed, 10 Mar 2010 23:10:16 +0000

Catching up on everyone’s blogs today… sorry it’s taken me a while to respond, Kelly!

I agree with you, I like your tagline – “Is today your lucky day?” – but it gets kind of lost because it’s so small. Would there be any way to incorporate it into your header (where the big white space is, maybe?)

And your about page – I actually like it a lot! The way you use a bigger font to highlight the main points, expanding upon that in a paragraph underneath, is really great. I can scan your about page, and just by reading the titles, learn exactly what your blog is about.

You do want to work on an ‘elevator pitch,’ though. Just imagine if you were on an elevator with a new blogger friend – how would you describe your blog in a few sentences?

By: Mariana

Mariana — Wed, 10 Mar 2010 23:00:52 +0000

Kimmy, I really enjoyed reading through your blog. I think your ‘about me’ is right on target – I loved learning the reason behind your blog’s name. My only suggestion to you right now would be to write more frequently!

By: Mariana

Mariana — Wed, 10 Mar 2010 22:52:20 +0000

I just visited your blog and think you are off to a great start! Hope you get something out of this challenge.

By: Kelly

Kelly — Sun, 07 Mar 2010 18:11:34 +0000

I finally did an about page and a tagline. I’m happy with my tagline, but the about page still needs some work…. WAY too long and confusing. But it’s a start!

Thanks again (very much) for leading us through this.
.-= Kelly´s last blog ..Friday Follow – The Oscars =-.

By: KimmyG

KimmyG — Sun, 07 Mar 2010 07:32:39 +0000

Thanks for the challenge, I'm new to blogging so I can use all the help I can get! I hope I did it right!Be Blessed! .-= KimmyG´s last blog ..How Far Will You Go? =-.

By: Christine

Christine — Fri, 05 Mar 2010 04:11:52 +0000

Ok I am just started out my blog so I will do my best to follow along with you! Thanks for the tips!!!

By: Mariana

Mariana — Thu, 04 Mar 2010 14:23:19 +0000

Thanks for participating, Jessica! I think your title definitely says it all! The question is, how would you expand on that if you’re talking to someone about your blog, say, on an elevator ride? I’m heading over to read your list post now.

By: Mariana

Mariana — Thu, 04 Mar 2010 05:04:53 +0000

Hi Jackie! Thanks so much for participating in the challenge! I just read your about page. LOVE how you made it seem like a newspaper article. Very creative

By: Jackie from FREEISMYLIFE

Jackie from FREEISMYLIFE — Thu, 04 Mar 2010 04:08:27 +0000

I'm a day behind, so I am catching up. I just added my ABOUT PAGE a month ago when I added my buttons for better organization. .-= Jackie from FREEISMYLIFE´s last blog ..Movie Review: She's Out of My League =-.

By: Jessica Jones

Jessica Jones — Thu, 04 Mar 2010 03:26:06 +0000

OK! I read this yesterday and my blog kinda already has one
Atlanta Mothers Guide to Fun, Fellowship, and Sanity!

but I am ready for #2!

Thanks for doing this